Light (Verse)

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  • Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

Light (Verse)

See how the light
in the morning
is lit
over the flower. 

Just as I am lit
by the light
of your love. 

See how the light
in the morning
flames when it is lit 
over the flower. 

Just as I am enflamed
when I am lit
by the dawn of the lights
of your love.  


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tierra7 commented on Light (Verse)

12-28-2009

awwww Ivan this is such..... an Eloquent read... , her radiant energy burns thru you........ as you flourishes Loves garden....your both on fire !!!! ~smile~ such Blessed moments are such engagements.......MUY BONITO !! AMIGO.... Namaste...Terra @}-'-.- (10+ )

tierra7

12/28/2009

OOPS! typo~ "Flourish"...i tend to have a pc accent at times ~smile~ sorrrry~

Grito

12/28/2009

What a wonderful way to be!!!

dancinghawk commented on Light (Verse)

12-28-2009

ah, Grito, you are a lovely light in the wilderness ... ty so much for this beautiful piece ... to the "faves" it goes ... looking forward to sharing this with my sweetheart ... -dh

Grito

12/28/2009

Dancing, Dancing, you are special, it is my honor that you are sharinmg it with your Sweetie, thank you very much!!!

bloomingsun commented on Light (Verse)

12-28-2009

beautiful and simple, the emotion of this shines brightly. Great write, very romantic and passionate.

Grito

12/28/2009

Thank you very much for your excellent review Bloomingsun!!!

knight4696 commented on Light (Verse)

12-28-2009

Beautiful Sentiments shine from the Light written in this verse! Romantic and deeply emotional! Awesome job my friend! ...Ken

Grito

12/28/2009

Thank you for your excellent review kind Ken!!!

bforibus commented on Light (Verse)

11-06-2009

i love the dancing in the rain feeling that i sense this character to be in. this is a greatly emotional piece and i loved it.

Grito

11/06/2009

Thank you very much for your great review and visit kind Bforibus!!!

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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Doris © 5
G.S.S.E.G.B.I
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Collection Schedule 6
Red Shirt 7
Camisa Roja 2
Libre (Free) 6
Sundown Diner 12
Starry Starry Night 10
Letter 11
Whispers 11
Velas 4
Star's 10
Shade 10
Gold 5
Vanity 11
Borne 8
Is 7
Quarks 5
Storm 9
Nihilist 7
Return 7
Light (Verse) 9
Against the Current (Space Prose) 7
Blancas 4
See 5
Time 8
Esa 2
Answer 7
Silver 3
Days 5
Luz 2
Elevator 4
Taste 5
Actias Luna 3
Recital 2
Carousel 8
August 5
Dado 1
Terrace 3
Willow 2
Sueño 1
Blues 3
Shields 2
Choice 2
Encuentro 1
Canvas 2
Dreams 5
One(Senyru) 1
Rays 2
Temporal 1
Air 3
Vivo 1
Folds 3
Ave 2
Season 4
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Sky 2
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Valz 1
Malla 1
Vuelven 2
3
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Chance 3
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Stars 2
Estrellas 2
Centavos 1
Stones 3
A 1
Laughter 4
Beige 2
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Pennies 2
Powder 1
Vigil 1
Away 2
Kite(Wind) 3
Review(Violin
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2
Sax 3
Bedlam 3
Fruit 2
Is Was (Stone Wind Water and Air) 3
Feather 4
Pluma 1
Wind 3
Vino 1
Ochos 0
Pleiades 5
Rest 3
Free 2
Palmas 1
Miles 2
Gaugauin( Haiku) 2
Shore 2
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2
Ice(Senyru) 3
Harvest(Cinqu
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1
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Flux 0
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Aliento 1
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Wing 4
Balance 3
Anguish(Senyr
u)
2
Arc 4
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Visperas 1
Dias 1
Sailboat 2
Treat(Tanka) 1
Embrace(Senyr
u)
2
Celestial(Cin
quain)
2
I C 4 I M 8
Lapel 6
Coupe 6
Seed 8
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White 10
She 6
Cream 5
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Flight 7
Aixa 4
Air, water and stone 7
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Safe 5
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