Locked and loaded...

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Wrote it a minute ago in a fucked up state.Like it cool if not U know what you can do!!

Locked and loaded...

Locked and caged in

My own living hell,

Brought out without

A dry funeral bell.

As life keeps kicking

At me time, and, time again

I can no longer tell you what

I am, I have lost my faith,

And become a mindless

Robot, that carries on,

Out of habit not life!

No longer do I care

About the finer things,

In life, no longer do

I care about anything!

But realizing what is

Left of my tortured mind,

I write this sinister words.

I scream them out, but they

Are only heard by the,

Echoes lost in the wind…..

inkmaster

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MarionYost commented on Locked and loaded...

02-05-2010

Nicely written, I can fell the anger and the pain of your words. Awesome. All the best -Marion-

inkmaster

02/05/2010

Another old one..Thanks,,Inkmaster

Teardrops commented on Locked and loaded...

12-05-2009

Life is not over for you a writer with such talent has the whole world ahead of him keep writing please

inkmaster

12/05/2009

thanks, if it was not for writing I would already be gone..I had a thought today. Life is like a broken toaster some days they are dark others you get light it depends on the electricity flow..Ink

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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