Loneliness

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    Loneliness

    SEPERATED FROM ALL OF YOU  THE ONES I WANT TO BE WITH

    ISOLATED AS IF YOU KNEW SOME REASON THAT I SHOULD BE DISHED

    LOST IN PITY WADDLING IN PAIN

    SUFFERING BECAUSE I WANT TO BE WITH YOU AGAIN

    SEARCHING ENDLESSLY THROUGH MY HEART AND MIND

    I CANT BE RIGHT ALL OF THE TIME

    TRUSTING NOONE NOT LISTENING TO A WORD

    I LOST YOUR LOVE FOR BECAUSE OF WHAT YOU HEARD

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    SwanSong commented on Loneliness

    11-07-2009

    Ohhhhhh...How Sad..... Too many times this happens, & in the end, a "whisperer" separates us from close friends & loved ones. Thank you for this poem.

    VenusianWoman commented on Loneliness

    11-02-2009

    Sadness along with loneliness. I feel and understand your pain.

    lonelynotalone commented on Loneliness

    10-17-2009

    You sound like a genuine person. You have a beautiful daugter. I hope things work themselves out. We just have to leave things up to God sometimes. I have felt your pain through your words. This poem was hurtful, bit it had good flow.

    Savant commented on Loneliness

    10-16-2009

    He say She say. I used to hide behind that cliche'. The truth usually was what they heard and I wasn't ready to deal with the truth back then. Didn't seem like the truth was as much fun as what I was doing. :)

    YungPoetiic commented on Loneliness

    10-15-2009

    u musta been feelin alot of pain i like it its short but it explains how you was feelin at the time well put together

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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