Long Distance Love

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    • ShanneN
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    Long Distance Love

    Too far to touch but close enough to feel.
    My love for you is oh so real.
    You're on my mind night and day.
    There is so much more i have to say.
    So much to say, so little time.
    So i thought i'd write you this little rhyme.
    You are the only one to pull this side out of me.
    Its true love, its fate, we are meant to be.
    Best day of my life will be the day we meet.
    I'll be floating there 'cause you already swept me off my feet.
    Endless love without a doubt.
    You're all i really think about.
    What to do? What to say?
    Just hold me tight and promise you'll stay.
    I'll love you forever babe, til the day i die.
    Til the sun is deceased and so is the sky.
    When everything becomes dark, we will still have our love.
    With every obsticle, we will rise above.
    <333333 i love you =]

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    Janu commented on Long Distance Love

    12-03-2010

    Lovely, somewhere on the way we think in the same manner, i would love read more on this.. keep going... read some of mine also... i love to see your comments.

    angelchaser commented on Long Distance Love

    10-06-2010

    Shannen, this is beautiful. I've had my own experiences with long distance love, so I can relate to what you have written. This put a smile on my face:) You're a gem.

    caboose187 commented on Long Distance Love

    08-02-2010

    oh i like this poem as well i especially like the last line very good

    lastyl commented on Long Distance Love

    07-17-2010

    brilliant!! that was straight from the heart and had a great smooth flow to it as well, some of your best work I've read yet!!

    Nibula5 commented on Long Distance Love

    05-03-2010

    I love this poem it's awesome. How do you come up with theses poems because all the poem you write are good perfect. :)

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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