Lost Soul

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    Just a side note.  I was watching Larry King Live, and he referred to Farrah Faucet as that other lady who died.  That made me sick.  King was making the point how world wide Michael Jackson was. But let's not think of him as a hero.  He was an entertainer.  

    Maybe I am acting as judge in jury of him, but read the history of the events of the Pedophile cases.  Our children are our future and must be protected at all costs.   

    This is one of my least favorite poems, because it is negative towards someone. Almost deleted it today.

    Lost Soul

    Farrah not mentioned

    King forgot her name.

    Passed on Ed Mcwho knows.

    What a cryin shame.

     

    Heart stopped. Age fifty.

    Spoiled kid had it rough

    Eye for little boys.

    Yeah, he was really tough.

     

    King of  Pop not cold

    Lost soul forever lost

    Buys off mistakes made.

    Twenty million the cost.

     

    You may say great artist

    Hell starts a new style

    Boy/Man tragic loss.

    Where is this pedophile?

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    Musicmynded1 commented on Lost Soul

    08-05-2010

    If you should delete this poem, then i should shred my song with overtones of "what the hell were you thinking mike?".. but now instead.. i think i'll just add more evidence to the platter.... good writing.
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    MootPoint

    08/05/2010

    I couldn't find that song of yours. I guess he really wanted a snooze. Thanks for the comment. :)

    cheronld commented on Lost Soul

    07-04-2010

    Your point shines abundantly clear in this amazing write...whether you agree with it or not....it puts a insightful look into just how his death was handled in the media....great write....Cher
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    devaamido commented on Lost Soul

    12-30-2009

    Great post! Very graphic....economically worded. Message abundantly clear. Gotta give this one a 10
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    BrittKun commented on Lost Soul

    12-17-2009

    I agree, With your poem so well. Lovely poem!!!! ; )
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    Rhymer commented on Lost Soul

    12-11-2009

    He was a musical icon and a that prayed on the innocent. Some would argue he was never found guilty. I say if it walks like a duck and speaks like a duck, it's a damn duck. Excellent write 10 from me.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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