Love gone

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    Love gone
    The wild winds are calming
    the once bright sun is dimming
    my thoughts of love are now hate
    and my once warm skin is cold
    I have no feeling
    and I have no regret
    I have no thoughts
    but I’ll never forget
    the embracement of your arms
    or the gentleness of your kiss
    but the feeling I had for you
    is fading fast
    never to come back.
    and how I look at this is simple
    I am free
    Changing my ways
    and thinking of my old
    Remembering what I once had
    all the warm and now the cold,
    my soul once warm
    is now so cold
    my burning of hatred
    has turned into the fire
    in the debts of hell
    Finding my heart
    is mission impossible
    because its gone
    along with the happiness
    betrayed by sick twisted lies
    that you’ve fed to me
    love is sweet
    until turned sour
    until hate is the only thing
    in my place of mind.

        

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