Love Me Like A Brother

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Brotherly Love in Trust and Intent is a  Love that  is  Strong in Roots....is what I need!

Love Me Like A Brother

Ah  amore,  with  the  one  I  adore
Loving  the  taste,  sound,  feel  and  smell
She  says  she  sees  me  and  is  compelled
She  is  my  Queen,  rib  from  my  chest,   my  love  beget
She  states  that  I’m  her  King  and  her……  Daddy?
Daddy??????????????
Our  Love  Promise  is  Put  on  Hold  and  I’m  Silent
Daddy  Who?   Is  that   what  you  see,  staring  at  me?
I  blink  my  eyes  hoping  for  a  return  of  clarity  in  her  eyes
To  my  surprise,  she  still  has  stars  in  her  eyes
Now  I  realize  that  to  her  I’m  a  far  away  picture
More  reminiscent  of  a  Father  figure……What  a  regret
Shame  is  the  name  of  the  game  to  this  inequality
Disappointed  that  she  sees  me  as  eternally  Paternally
Sure  I  gave  wisdom  and  received  learning  inbetween
Sure  to  head  our  household,  that  we  both  share
Sure  I  like  being  called  Daddy  when  I’m  good  in  bed
But  in  all  of   these  assuredly  Father-isms  remains  sojurn
So  hell  yeah,  there  is  concern  for  her  undying  love  for  Poppie!
You  are  not  my  mother,  but  my  lover  and   friend
I am  not  your  Father,  Daddy,  but  your  lover  and   man
My  hopes  and  designs  is   for  us  to  grow  old  in  unison
Not  to  watching  you  grow  up,  waiting  for  the  woman  
So  please  stop  with  the  Electra  complex,  we  are  not  related
Your  Dad  said  he  would  give  you  away   matrimonially
That  day  may  not  come,  unless   you  can  overcome  fixation
RIGHT  NOW,  cuz  I’m  not  waiting,  my  lover  is   not  my  daughter
Although  I  love  her,  my  daughter  that  is,  as   I’m   her  Father
But  what  I  need  from  you  Miss  Cherie  Amore,  is  for  you  
To  Decide  to  Love  Me  Like  We  are  Equal   or  else   I  must  leave
You  see  I  would  rather  be  loved  like  a  brother   or  even  a  friend
Than  to  be  in  love  with  a  child   who  still  seeking  child  support 
From  a  Figurative  Father!
Ah  amore,  with  the  one  I  adore
Loving  the  taste,  sound,  feel  and  smell
She  says  she  sees  me  and  is  compelled
She  is  my  Queen,  rib  from  my  chest,   my  love  beget
She  states  that  I’m  her  King  and  her……  Daddy?
Daddy??????????????
Our  Love  Promise  is  Put  on  Hold  and  I’m  Silent
Daddy  Who?   Is  that   what  you  see,  staring  at  me?
I  blink  my  eyes  hoping  for  a  return  of  clarity  in  her  eyes
To  my  surprise,  she  still  has  stars  in  her  eyes
Now  I  realize  that  to  her  I’m  a  far  away  picture
More  reminiscent  of  a  Father  figure……What  a  regret
Shame  is  the  name  of  the  game  to  this  inequality
Disappointed  that  she  sees  me  as  eternally  Paternally
Sure  I  gave  wisdom  and  received  learning  inbetween
Sure  to  head  our  household,  that  we  both  share
Sure  I  like  being  called  Daddy  when  I’m  good  in  bed
But  in  all  of   these  assuredly  Father-isms  remains  sojurn
So  hell  yeah,  there  is  concern  for  her  undying  love  for  Poppie!
You  are  not  my  mother,  but  my  lover  and   friend
I am  not  your  Father,  Daddy,  but  your  lover  and   man
My  hopes  and  designs  is   for  us  to  grow  old  in  unison
Not  to  watching  you  grow  up,  waiting  for  the  woman  
So  please  stop  with  the  Electra  complex,  we  are  not  related
Your  Dad  said  he  would  give  you  away   matrimonially
That  day  may  not  come,  unless   you  can  overcome  fixation
RIGHT  NOW,  cuz  I’m  not  waiting,  my  lover  is   not  my  daughter
Although  I  love  her,  my  daughter  that  is,  as   I’m   her  Father
But  what  I  need  from  you  Miss  Cherie  Amore,  is  for  you  
To  Decide  to  Love  Me  Like  We  are  Equal   or  else   I  must  leave
You  see  I  would  rather  be  loved  like  a  brother   or  even  a  friend
Than  to  be  in  love  with  a  child   who  still  seeking  child  support 
From  a  Figurative  Father!

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Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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Solace from the Masses 1
Love Rehearsals 2
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DISCIPLINE IN THOUGHT DISCIPLES 0
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THE BAG 1
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THE AIR I BREATHE 0
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MY CLAIM 2b 0
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Ungrateful Relatives 1
AMERICAN IDLE 0
ACAPELLA HOLLA (an acrostic poetic piece) 0
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0
To Come Through..... 0
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FISH KILLS 1
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SONGS OF A RENEGADE 2
KNIGHTS OF BLACKNESS 1
How Many(s)....A Life's Daily Conversion 0
Love Done Left Here 1
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MUTE COMMUNICATION 2
LOVE TREASON 0
Love Me Like A Brother 0
Nurturing the Nature of Love 2
PERSONAL REVOLUTION 0
CEILING TO ETERNITY 0
THE LAST SUMMER NIGHT 0
WRITES OF WRONG 0
LOVE DAZE 0
CHEESE IN THE CRUST 0
BACK IN THE DAYZ versus NOW A DAYZ 0
OBSESSION OF CURRENCY 0
PEACE OF MIND 2
Cakewalking 0
What Was IS Always 1
BABY ITS COLD OUTSIDE 2
CAN'T TAKE BACK WHAT I DONE PUT IN 3
EXPANSION 0
THE BOOK 0
PASSION ATTACK 0
WHAT'S THE STORY 3
MARCH TO SEPTEMBER LOVE 4
TO CLIMB FROM BEHIND 2
A FISH OUT OF WATER 1
The Siren 0
AWAKEN TO LOVE 2
MULTITUDES OF THE ONE 1
MY ILL BLUES 0
Travels of the Fool 2
I ASPIRE 3
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MY HEART HEARS YOU 4
MY HOOD (a fairy real tale) 1
NEEDIN' A READING 5
WATCHIN' "THE" NEWS 0
Life Recognition 3
WHEN LOVE AIN'T NEW 2
MY STAR 2
SILENCE 2
IDENTITY 2
Love Revenge 2
Panhandlin' Love 2
FAMILY OR PEOPLE WHO LIVE WITH ME 2
Intention of Attention 0
Oh Say Can't You See 1
A Love's Debt 2
PIMP'S KARMA 1
Travelin' Without Moving 0
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That Feeling of Reeling 1
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