Love On My Tongue...

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Im not the type that is able to speak her emotions well... I write what I feel... Hopefully I can sum up the courage to tell him...

Love On My Tongue...

I want to say it,
its on the tip of my tongue...
Just three little words to tell you
how much Im in love...

Its rediculous, you know,
how many times Ive had the chance...
but God, its like Im scared,
because those words might be my last...

What if you dont say them back?
It would kill me inside...
What if you say them back,
only for them to be lies?

I dont think you understand,
Boy, youre my world...
Youre important to me...
So why cant I say the words?

Does my mind know something
that my heart doesnt?
... I have to say, truely,
I dont want to think about it...


Just know, Baby... I love you...

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Sx9 commented on Love On My Tongue...

11-04-2010

at some point in time you must hold up to your responsibility and just let it rip,so you did and it must have felt great,,we are your peeps been there and done a few,yes this is great and love is due,,

ImStillHere

11/05/2010

yeah it felt incredible. :) and i know yall are my peeps. you guys helped me tell him actually... ~Audrey

Musicmynded1 commented on Love On My Tongue...

11-04-2010

like i said... ur stuff is always so good... knew that about u the first tiime i read u... and this one does not disappoint.:)

ImStillHere

11/04/2010

awwwwww... thank you, Music... :) ~Audrey

papapaczki commented on Love On My Tongue...

11-04-2010

Good way to get your feelings out. I hope this helped ease your apprehension!

themommyof2 commented on Love On My Tongue...

11-03-2010

Very, very nice. Very scary thing to confess your love. Usually worth the risk

ImStillHere

11/03/2010

it was worth it... ~Audrey

nam1292 commented on Love On My Tongue...

11-03-2010

aww.. this is cute n so pure and full of innocence i know ur fear but hun if u cant say it have him read this and i promise he will return the phrase w/ a truthful heart

ImStillHere

11/03/2010

thanks Nammy. I actually did get up and tell him :) i was so nervous. he said it back and meant it... :) im so incredibly happy ~Audrey

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