Love Without End

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This is a poem dedicated to my former romantic partner , Loral Nettle Joy. Thank You for the inspiration.

Love Without End

My senses are swept away
From the intake of lovely laural,
And sweet lavender, and lilac.
As I stand still, the thrill
Sways me into a silent bliss.

This for a single moment
Becomes an omnipotent way,
To melt inside and stay,
In this eternal love without end.

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sandyb commented on Love Without End

11-04-2012

Those truly are moment to hold onto forever. Is it bad to have had that moment more than once ;)

skymist2 commented on Love Without End

01-11-2011

Beautiful, enough said but I have to write more to comment...definitely a 10.

Jammin commented on Love Without End

08-03-2010

Love it when a moment like that creeps up on you. The timing is so perfect that you can savor it and remember with remarkable clarity the impression of exquisite beauty.

Merlyn commented on Love Without End

06-27-2010

Very short , yet sweet. Always grateful to fall into those moments, that last forever. Thanks for sharing.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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