LOVE YOU SAY...LOVE I SAY....

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TWO DIFFERENT CULTURAL APPROACHES TO THE CONCEPT OF LOVE.

LOVE YOU SAY...LOVE I SAY....

LOVE YOU SAY IS GEOMETRIC.
LOVE I SAY IS EMOTION
FEELINGS, YEARNINGS AND ATTACHMENTS.

LOVE YOU SAY IS METHODICAL
AND THERE IS A SCIENTIFIC APPROACH
TO THE CHEMISTRY THAT MUST TAKE PLACE.

I SAY LOVE IS WASHING YOUR SOFT HAIR
IN THE SINK OF MY ARMS
AND CARESSING YOUR FACE
IN THE DEEPNESS OF MY HANDS
AND LOVING YOU WITH EVERYTHING I CAN.

LOVE YOU SAY IS FINDING THE RIGHT MATCH
THROUGH AN ARCHITECTURAL DESIGN
THAT MATCHES MAN AND WOMAN.

LOVE I SAY IS BEARING MYSELF TO YOU
FEELING YOUR TENDER KISSES UPON MY FOREHEAD
WHEN YOU RETURN FROM WORK.
LOVE I SAY IS YOU AND ME.

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catharss101 commented on LOVE YOU SAY...LOVE I SAY....

01-06-2011

I really like this one..... A+ from me! Goodjob I say.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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LOVE YOU SAY...LOVE I SAY.... 1
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BAG LADY 4
LOVE ME 2
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I TOLD POETRY 2
ALMOST IN YOUR HAND 5
George N: The Fight of His Life 2
Diversity: A Gift from God 2
JAZZ MAN 3
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Little South African Girl 3
A BLESSING 2
ONLY WHEN THE MOON IS FULL... 1
Christopher 3
If... 4
The Color of Caramel 6
Save Me 5