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    love

    love is a river,
    you could be a diver.

    love is here,
    let's go there.

    love is my heart pounding,
    i can almost hear the tears sounding.

    for love is not yours,
    I'm breacking down the doors.

    I can not find the one,
    for i'm alone.

    let me find you,
    for i am you.

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    Kingwebstar commented on love

    05-31-2012

    Great job .Just needs spell check which appear when the letter has a red line under it then you left click and it spells it the correct way.Keep writing princess I am here 4 you . LOVE DA KING

    Crush commented on love

    08-11-2009

    are you sure you are ten?....you have a better grasp on things than most of my friends...lol. killer quill.

    laydbak1 commented on love

    06-10-2009

    From a ten year old, this is very good and shows you have a great start on thinking about life in a grander view... This will serve you well in years to come...

    poetryprincess

    06/10/2009

    thanks

    hdmac commented on love

    06-10-2009

    "Breacking" should be spelt "breaking". The beginning of the sentences could be capitalized for a greater effect. I like the fact that you used commas and a full stop to add emphasis.

    poetryprincess

    06/10/2009

    i'm sorry

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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