Loving You

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Loving You

Our first kiss
Was certain bliss
I melted in your arms

We had some wine
Was feeling fine
Wish everyone could feel like this

The night was young
In addition, so was I
You could see I was incredibly shy

Tenderly and sweetly
To my surprise
You kissed me under the starlit sky

Then in your arms
You held me tight
It felt so incredibly right

I love the way
You make me feel
Loving you, completes me still


~ Mary A. Eaton ~
© Copyright 2010

Tags: Love, Passion, Relationship

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ForeverPoet commented on Loving You

06-28-2010

nice write. brings us back to our first loves beginning, and remembers the stirring emotions of that first kiss, the shyness, and the glory. sweet poem!...............................................................................~~F~~

Tempy commented on Loving You

03-14-2010

Tenderly and sweetly To my surprise You kissed me under the starlit sky ... this was real cute

LadyL714 commented on Loving You

03-13-2010

What a well-written poem. The meter and rhythm makes the flow so smooth and easy to follow. Thanks for sharing your thoughts of young love with us.

Rhymer commented on Loving You

03-13-2010

Well written poem to the one you love,...........10 from me...........

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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First Kiss 4
Gonna Get Ya, Sooner Or Later 2
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She Smiles He Smiles 3
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What We Make of It ... 5
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Secret Lovers 4
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Hey Girl 3
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Of All My Dreams 5
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Longing For More 4
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Taste of Love 6
Remembering 6
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Dreams 9
God and Me 6
I Surrender 5
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Just Go ... 5
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Loving You 4
Lady Luck 7
Last Moonlight Walk 2
Morning's Dew 1
Last Chance For Love 1
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Just Tell Me 3
Chasing Butterflies 3
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The Promise Ring 5
My Love For you 2
Remember 6
Time 5
Alone With You 7
The Child Inside 5
Shattered Dreams 8
Honey 4
First Love 6
Little Blue Eyed Girl 4
To See You Just Once More 9
Sundown Saloon 4
Night Train 3
The Light Within 10
If I Looked At You.. 2
Goldfish 1
A Hair Stylists Nightmare 2
The Way I Feel Tonight 2
A Cold Winters Night 2
Girls Night Out 1
Winter Mornings 1
A Dying Soldier's Prayer 2
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Whispers 5
Put a Little Love in Your Heart 5
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One Soldiers' Prayer 4
Military Babies 3
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In My Dreams 1
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Sleeping With Angels 12