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this came from somewhere.....there is really nothing else to say


lust will fill and overflow like seeds in flight
the wind will carry you
and no storm or dark light
will ever shadow brighter

the eagles all migrate to the headwaters
but intensity is divided in the middle of the night
as wings of fire splash and succumb
into fountains of love pouring from above

angelic voices calling soldiers home
dropping like roses past their fullest bloom
parades of unfortunate starry-eyed youths
all singing together beneath the blessing of the moon

entwined in souls as small as raccoons
deep in the delta and as wide as lagoons
dwelling and delving and tunnelling and funnelling
breathing in the spores of effortless summoning

jackdaws and cyclones circling
pulling trees by the roots
and branching into memories
of impossible pursuits

bodies burgeoning, turgid and aware
spouting romantic folly into the still night air
passing each other and barely aware
that to touch skin is sublime but to be touched is rare

overtly discrete and welling beneath our feet
like a wave that never breaks but climbs over the shore
relentlessly threading and impossible to ignore
curling our toes, we can't help but explore

all nations on time for the end of the world
ejaculating into caverns of the void, we swarm
over ruins and rampant with blood in our eyes
as animals we clash and as humans we die

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purdylox commented on Lust


this is a nice write I reread some parts a few times cuz I enjoyed them so well



thank you, im glad you enjoyed it:)

susanismith commented on Lust


I love your choice of words and how they play well with each other. The flow is fun but yet intense, and I love how it lures you in to read more and want more...thanks for the invite. Great write!

Charlie23 commented on Lust


I enjoyed this poem! I was curious about the color of the font, why there was two different colors? Is it because the stanzas in black are darker than than the ones in purple?



lol...i wrote the first three stanzas in chat then cut and pasted them into the adding a new poem section, and i couldnt figure out how to make the rest of the poem purple after that as i was finishing it....long story short, ended up being two colors

SuSpence commented on Lust


Great write, I enjoyed the read. The line that stood out to me the most was 'that to touch skin is sublime but to be touched is rare.' I also liked the last line quite a bit, 'as animals we clash and as humans we die.' I thought of it as you driving the point home what makes humans more than just an animal, our emotions. 10 from me Amad. Peace and Love, Spence



thank you spence, you called this one, that last line pretty much summed up the poem

Rygar commented on Lust


once the animalistic fury subsides ... we are still only human... very nicely written Amad! It read like a battle between knowing and feeling... i dig it man. :-) brilliant as usual.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

AmadeusEx’s Poems (89)

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Icebreakers 0
I can't believe this is FANTASY 1
Minstrel 7
Lust 15
Wanderlust 6
Carving Pumpkins 4
Brothers 3
Second Chances 8
The Infinite Appeal 4
A Song for the Departed 3
I Die the Next Day 4
There Are No Bubbles 3
Ephemeral Dream Girl 2
Idle While.... 6
crossing bridges 8
King Forever 2
To Deceitful Eyes 1
Star Burning Bright 5
Swirling in the Tidewater 4
An Inch Away from Daylight 3
Shovelful of Earth 6
American Highway 1
Bitches Be Loco 4
Eddies of Fate 3
Magnified 5
Legacy Part One 4
Moving Inexorably Further Behind 12
Salvation of the Roses 39
The Emptiness of Breathing 11
Fall Into the Stream and Hold Your Breath 6
The Bloom Of Death 18
Slancha Ireland... 3
My Death Inside Me 0
Dark Passenger 4
No Salvation for the Saved 0
In the End we Pray... 1
I Walk With You 3
Regret of the Rarely Seen 9
This Daughter of Ours 4
This Day is Gone 8
Ladykiller 14
Insider 5
Bone 3
Ode to Holy Mountain 6
A Rembrandt in my Pocket 7
Tree 8
My Demented Decline 7
The Never Said 16
23 Seconds 14
The Blood of Ours 10
My Death Will Rise 7
Immortality of Youth 2
Shelter Seeker 12
I Took Her 9
The Bones of the Clown 8
Nothing But our Nights 27
Atlas and Pandora (the Strength and the Plague) 16
Sign 4
Rainbow Warrior 7
Grandma' 1
Faith of An Unbeliever 12
Dual We You or Me... 1
As A Child 8
Heroes and Cowards 5
Shaitan 2
A Legacy 0
Beauty Awaits 2
Only So Far 4
A Composition of Sin 5
Bitter Salt in a Laboring Heart 0
Unmeant 3
Death of Promise 5
I'll Never Wake Up Free 2
Bleak 1
Paper Walls 4
At The Edge of Ruin 4
Kingdom in our Hearts 2
Air And Smoke 4
Eyes Struck Blind 3
You and I 3
Miz Understood Dream 2
One Escape 0
Heaven 3
Halo 3
Glass in Hand 2
Digital Legs 4
Immolated 4