luv is huh

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    luv is huh

    love can be a mess when you think bout yourself
    cant be all bout you gotta put it on the shelf
    to live for another thats not livin for you
    trying to keep upwit the jones man that feelings not cool
    i can tell you im threw but ill never be over you
    just keep it pimpins what my pride tells me to do
    got me lovein hateful tunes cursing memories of you and me
    if i knew wed face doom it would of never been matramony
    i get a call from my homie tell him my hearts in defeat
    told me he pray for me
    got me up all night cause i cant sleep
    i walked away ,but you let me
    tried to come back but its messy
    the closeri try to get the further you are and it stresses me
    now i dont know if this was ment to be
    i say its all bout you
    you say its all bout me
    but it is what it is and im hurt by the truth
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    holla

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    BlacknWhite commented on luv is huh

    03-25-2009

    I can feel it. You brought it out and made it known. I like it. And the pain will ease...theres brighter days coming.

    BridgetBowen commented on luv is huh

    03-03-2009

    Raw emotion. I can feel your pain.

    prophesy commented on luv is huh

    02-15-2009

    i feel dat/ was married 20yrs, divorced 5. an this will pass. (peace n prophesy homie)u good.

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    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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