Lying In Bed

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  • Lost Love
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  • Sadness
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  • Emotional

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    Those long lonely silent nights that seem as though they last an enternity...

    Lying In Bed

    Remembering sweet memories attached,
    Taking risks,
    Letting go,
    Opening up,
    Yet holding on.

    Always going away,
    Always loving,
    Never dying.

    Realizing I’m missing you,
    Realizing I’m lying in bed…

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    Love hurts!!!

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    carynontherhine commented on Lying In Bed

    08-13-2010

    This is definitely you, no doubt. Taking risks and letting go. This could be Susan. Especially like the ending also on this one. And I love the picture you chose. My poet, my son
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    ApaqRasgirl commented on Lying In Bed

    07-27-2010

    that was a wonderful little poem dear friend, so much emotions held in just a few words. and you did it to perfection as always. thanks and blessings your way, for bright days of love and happiness. loves ya asha
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    angel33614

    07/29/2010

    little poem with a big heart, than you so much for your kind words and review! Many a long night, laying on the bed dreaming of a past love, I am sure many can relate to this one. Purity of the soul, journey well!!! Angel

    carynontherhine commented on Lying In Bed

    07-27-2010

    J, this one used to really grab me. this is you! You would lie in bed at times for a day or so. Not long. Maybe just thinking or missing the person. Like in your poem, realizing im missing you, realizing im lying in bed. Love the love hurts after the ending. Shorter but extremely powerful. Not to mention very true. Especially the memories. I love the remembering sweet memories attached. Still the memories are a part of you and your mind. How sad honey. I hate to read your hurt and pain. It hurts yet i know it is the past. That is all i care about. not the present.
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    angel33614

    07/29/2010

    thanks so much for the review mom, always appreciated and welcomed! This poem is short and sweet but speaks volumes to the heart of my soul and the pain and torment of the time. Purity of the soul, journey well!!! Angel aka your loving son

    carynontherhine commented on Lying In Bed

    07-14-2010

    This one was at one time so true to be you! Whom I am not quite sure. Oh yes, I think I got it! I can imagine you lying there in your deep thoughts then the feeling deep inside that love lost is painful..
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    FranzJ commented on Lying In Bed

    05-23-2010

    being alone thr mond can wonder - to lonley places- - - - - -
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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