Make love; Not war.

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    Make love; Not war.

    The job of the unknown, the secret that has grown, turn the page in life’s book, follow step by step, there is no rep, etition, intuition, follow what you see, see what you believe, believe the impossible, Maximum you will achieve, all is fair in love and war, til srgt comes knocking on your door, a son, a brother, an uncle, now dead, a bullet, damn bullet, pierced through his head. To fight for his country was what he was born to do, who fucking started this war?, please tell me who. I blame you, for he is now gone, this immense pain, it will prolong.  No more dinner table with this familiar face, why do we fight? Is it a stab at genocide against the human race? Stop the bull shit, stop the loud roar. Im just here to say, Make love; Not war.

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    lastyl commented on Make love; Not war.

    07-17-2010

    pretty intense, very heart felt and I surely agree!! Had me on the edge of my seat for the next line, this hits home to many!!! brilliant job!!

    ianraiseland commented on Make love; Not war.

    06-17-2010

    politica aside, this one hits home. many of us have losts friends and fam, and for what? ,akes me yern for a better world. . .i wish i could do something! good poem, cudos!

    daniel081180 commented on Make love; Not war.

    04-30-2010

    WOW you can really feel the immense pain and anger. beautifully written great job and i agree with this poem.

    Nibula5 commented on Make love; Not war.

    04-30-2010

    Nice poem your a great poet. Awesome poems you have.

    thecross commented on Make love; Not war.

    04-29-2010

    The emotions in the write are apparent and understandable war affects a lot of people. Nice write.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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