man who kills

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    • phantom
    • LOVE HAS NO FACE, NO COLOR, AND NO SHAPE. LOVE IS WHEN TWO PEOPLES HEART COME TOGETHER AND BECOME ONE.

    man who kills
    now a man who kills is considered bad
    but only one choice he had
    which was kill or be killed no other did he have
    i bet even god sees that his future is sad
    he thinks because he killed one man he is a thug
    acts so hard that to his creation he shows no love
    and since his creations birth he never gave him a hug
    he must know that there is one imortal looking the man above
    he said that his worse fear is to die
    but he killed so many now dat in a tomb he should already lye
    and for those who show him no respect a gunshot is his reply
    when he kills is the only time he feel alive
    now for him death is certain
    me the angel the angel of death is surfing
    but first i must see what other souls he is hurting
    because my bow and arrow to take his soul are erching
    in eternal sleep his body shall forever lye
    death was his worse fear now he shall die

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    ManOnTheMoon commented on man who kills

    07-08-2010

    Who is to say that one mans crime is any worst than another mans, is the same that says it makes a difference in which dog just peed on his shoes.
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    786mona commented on man who kills

    05-08-2010

    a lot of killing dude! great poem with a lot of passion! nice wrte:)
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    purdylox commented on man who kills

    04-27-2010

    this is a good poem full of passion.................................................
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    DeepEclipse commented on man who kills

    03-18-2009

    Reminds me of a quote from Eldridge Cleaver: "Rather than see themselves as perpetrators of misdeeds, they look upon themselves as prisoners of war, victims of a dog-eat-dog system that is so heinous as to cancel out their own malefactions; in the jungle there is no right or wrong."
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    Footprints2002 commented on man who kills

    03-15-2009

    It was a good poem, looking into someone life that has killed, i do understand kill before you get killed many think of that, but it leave me to think there is to much killing and it needs to stop. Way To Go
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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