Manic Depression: On the down-side

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    Manic Depression: On the down-side
    Broke...Scared...Depressed...Alone
    I only want to be at home
    No one seems to understand
    There are no funds or back up plans

    Feeling good can never last
    Two good months and then I crash
    All my plans and crazy schemes
    Become sleepless nightmare dreams

    Trying hard to face the days
    Of anxious thoughts and downcast ways
    Friends are tired of my calls
    Or can not understand my fall

    Beyond the place I can turn back
    Slipping fast, one more attack
    Losing months or maybe years
    For my depression there's no cure

    Is there not a place to go
    Where feeling good won't lead to low?

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    Kaiprin commented on Manic Depression: On the down-side

    12-12-2009

    As a fellow sufferer from the illness, this poem really resonates with me. Well done. The "fall" is one of the hardest things to deal with.
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    inkmaster commented on Manic Depression: On the down-side

    12-11-2009

    There is always a place to go where feelin good won't lead to a low, you have to find it deep within ...I understand your thought all too well..a good read.......inkmaster
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    WordSlinger commented on Manic Depression: On the down-side

    12-09-2009

    Sometimes I get thrown into this void, That's why I stay, positive, to never get anoid, this poem does work, hits hrd, rhymed very good, and tight, great job, ty WS
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    MarionYost commented on Manic Depression: On the down-side

    12-09-2009

    AMAZING! My dad Is Bipolar, I think I MIGHT BE... undiagnosed though. Couldn't have worded this better myself. You really explained it in depth for those who don't fight this battle. Great write. all the best -Marion-
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    blackfootlady commented on Manic Depression: On the down-side

    12-08-2009

    I suffer from that and my medication make me level and good.Look me up sometime and maybe I can give you hope.your really feelin this... good write
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