Meeting a girl’s father

2 Comments

Tags:
  • Life
    • ,
  • Emotional
    • ,
  • Inspirational
    • ,
  • Humor
    • ,
  • My Feelings
    • ,
  • Fear

    Meeting a girl’s father

    As I sit here in her living room

    Meeting her father for the very first time

     

    I’m trying to find the right thing to say to her very protective daddy

    I wonder what I should do

     

    Should I stay here terrified tapping the floor with my black shiny shoe?

    Or should I get up and leave

     

    But it was too late

    As he entered the room it felt like I was in the mist of doom

    All I could hear and feel is my heart beating tremendously fast

     

    When he began to speak as he approached me

    His powerful voice was somewhat like a punch

    It knocked me right off my feet

     

    So all that I could do after that is get up and run

    Just like the release of my body liquid was running down my pants leg

     

    And as I pulled my man hood back together

    I realized that the feeling of meeting a girl’s father for the first time is not at all fun.

    Poem Comments

    (2)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    cousinsoren commented on Meeting a girl’s father

    03-13-2010

    Hey, I love the clean ,easy style of this narrative poem. The humour is veiled, but a reader can easily identify with the entire story line of this immaculately crafted piece. I had to meet a future mother- in-law. ........LOL "man hood" should be written........"manhood". Cosmetics and rhythm would have improved with punctuation. Overall, this is masterly composed narrative piiece...a pleasure to read with a smile and a chuckle. My rating is 10+
    Reply to Comment

    almonord1990

    06/18/2010

    thank you very much

    Pisces00 commented on Meeting a girl’s father

    01-06-2010

    Oh yeah I can defiently relate to that.... As far as I see it, when you present yourself in a genuine fashion, flaws and imperfections in clear view, they can at least admire you for keeping your image down to the letter. But very nice
    Reply to Comment

    almonord1990

    01/09/2010

    Thank you and remember to pass my SN on to other people so they can read read and i will do the same for u.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

    almonord1990’s Poems (28)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    In the mist of my eyes 2 07/11/2010
    3 Times her size 5 01/18/2010
    Feeling the sheets 3 01/09/2010
    Meeting a girl’s father 2 01/03/2010
    I am so in love with you 1 01/03/2010
    Drifting 1 10/27/2009
    Don't forget about the love 2 10/11/2009
    Preparing me 1 10/11/2009
    Our hearts beat as one 1 10/10/2009
    I wear the pants in this relationship 2 10/10/2009
    I can feel it in the wind. 3 10/10/2009
    You are the maker of who I am 3 10/06/2009
    I have to be real 1 10/06/2009
    I will 2 10/05/2009
    CHANGING MY LIFE 4 10/04/2009
    Mother Set Me Free 3 10/04/2009
    HIGHER 4 10/04/2009
    SHINE 6 10/04/2009
    STEP BY STEP 2 10/04/2009
    LOVE KILLS 2 10/04/2009
    Father and son 2 10/04/2009
    Tragedy 4 10/04/2009
    your past 3 10/04/2009
    the fight 3 10/04/2009
    Did you ever dream? 5 06/01/2009
    Using You 7 05/31/2009
    The Strangest Feelings 6 05/31/2009
    My Type Of Women 7 05/31/2009
    Top of Page