Midnight Wolves

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Beware of the wolves!

Midnight Wolves

OOOOOOOOWWWWWW!
The midnight timber wolves howl through the night,
you hear that their near,
your heart starts to beat rapidly,
as if you strummed your guitar in rage.
The dark night lingers on to you,
you feel darkness caving in,
OOOOWWWW!
You ran for you dear life,
pray that the mighty wolves doesn't get you,
you hear the heavy breathing of the wolves,
you see your life fading away drastically,
OWWWWWW!!!
As they surround you,
you panic by circling around and around,
seeing every wolf one by one,
their hairs stick up as if you applied gel,
their eyes eagerly glancing at you,
it seems as if their going to pounce on you,
they see you,
and you see them.
You hear other voices,
as if they are commanding the wolves,
you look and look,
no one's there.
OOOWWWWW!!!
You turn and see ghosts,
spirits,
pale and scary,
all dressed in white robes.
One points at you and says,
"Here shall end, this shall be the end of your trails, now say goodbye for thy shall disappear"
NOOOOOOO! I yelled.
OWWWWWWWW!!
The wolves attacked fiercely.

My life drifted away,
drifted unto a cloud,
and I saw the Lord,
he came to take me,
it was my time,
he shall take me and take care of me.
And I shall save other victims, so they should be aware of those Midnight timber wolves.

OOOOOOOWWWW!!!!!

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itzamateo commented on Midnight Wolves

08-06-2009

wow awesome Ilove your imagery mood sensibilty very smart touching and sweet and tender very respectable poem!

Dreamer123

08/06/2009

Thanks alot itzamateo. thanks for your comment. God Bless you. :D

Plot121 commented on Midnight Wolves

07-31-2009

The Flow was well done rather haunting images but left for a great read. I like how the plot played out a good write Dreamer123. Robert...

Dreamer123

07/31/2009

Thanks alot. Thank you very much for your comment. God Bless you

Tempestlady commented on Midnight Wolves

07-29-2009

I foun this to ba a very enlighteing piece. Spiritual in a natural, and religious way. Kinda scary but very good work. For one so young, you have much promise and blooming skill. Write on...

Dreamer123

07/30/2009

Thanks. Thank you so much tempestlady thank you for reading and stopping by to comment thanks you all rock for that. Thanks so much. :D God bless.

dragonfly1023 commented on Midnight Wolves

07-29-2009

could this vision be proof of reincarnation? who can say, but it is a vivid and very well written encounter for sure. great write.

Dreamer123

07/30/2009

Thanks alot dragonfly you rock too. Your poems are amazing. :D and thanks alot your stopping by God Bless:D

sk8ergirl commented on Midnight Wolves

07-26-2009

wow that was a great poem it reminded me of one of my fave books call of the wild. thanks so much

Dreamer123

07/26/2009

Your welcom girl Thanks for everything. :D your are awesome Thank you very much Thanks God Bless

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