Miz Understood Dream

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    Miz Understood Dream

    my dreams are insensitive creatures
    biting and tearing at my daily endeavors
    forcing epiphanies
    and condemning realities
    a congo cotillion
    of dark course haired monkeys
    a’ flockin to the mental symbols
    of bananas and cream concoctions
    that only exist
    in the nights after the hundred watt lights
    have been flicked away from my mind
    into the dim recesses
    of perspiring time
    trading heartfelt congratulations
    and debating the misled miserable monsters
    in charge of important negotiations
    this is an investigation
    into the most private of privates
    the places where X marks downtrodden buried souls
    and cyberspace soldiers
    dig unassuming black holes
    where legions of bare breasted tropical dancers
    bear the faces of worrisome mothers
    and psychology takes a holiday
    in the face
    of every family member murdering
    while laughing at the tragedy
    my dreams are places I dare to tread
    for I cannot help but fall asleep
    and though I wake up smiling or screaming
    I at least
    wake up dreaming

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    stever commented on Miz Understood Dream

    11-19-2009

    i really enjoy this kind of writeings ..mine are somewhat like this but yous much better

    poet4dasoul commented on Miz Understood Dream

    07-02-2009

    Poet Ex that was a strong detailed insightful piece. The imagery that had run through my mind was like a clashing diabolical circus with trick clowns trying to run the show.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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