MOSES

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    • christianprep
    • done with my study it was hard now my poem is published its called Prayer Study and Poem

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    When Moses Hands grew tired, they took a stone and put it under him and he sat on it. Aaron and Hur held his hands up-one on one side, one on the other- so that his hands remained steadytill sunset. So Joshua overcame the Amaleekite army with sword
    Exodus 17:12-13


    you will unterstand this verse by reading the poem
    i love this Poem
    i love this
    verse no won
    can walk the walk alone

    MOSES

    Moses Your hands are tired

    And Aaron and Hur

    Gave some help

    As he sat on a rock

    They lifted his hands

    Because he falls short

    Until dawn

    That way he fought with his sword

    And remained held with his faith

     

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    gregster commented on MOSES

    10-18-2010

    COOL AND TRUE VERY BRIEF AND ON POINT..THAT IS A NICE POEM
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    christianprep

    10/19/2010

    the poem is actully longer than that i just shortened it up I got very passionete when i wrote this one.... I just want to get the point out that God is alsome and so are his mericles

    Shadow70 commented on MOSES

    07-23-2009

    I liked the poem. It was well written. Nice job...
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    Darkxaster commented on MOSES

    06-28-2009

    wowo this got me thinking about a few things one i just found god nd 2 who is my Paul i now i cant be my Paul cause my name is Paul anyways i just got myself lost good job i liked it
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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