Motion

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As we face life's trials a motion becomes necessary every so often!

Motion

Come now my reflection,

dirt on my feet from the accumulation of days.

In the past

I contested the straightening of drawers,

Folded articles of war and peace.

Now I understand the motive:

Order is needed to keep life flowing,

Evidence of smiles and tears left along the way.

Come now the present:

Drawers emptied,

Contents ready to be recycled.

Cycles, the movement of today and tomorrow:

Sorrow, delight, hope and flight.

Horizons no longer studded with birds,

Overfished oceans letting out a cry,

Oil more important than reef.

Who will care to listen?

imminent explosion,

sun burning through atmospheric hole.

The need to straighten up drawers persists.

I insist in wiping dust, in washing up the dishes until the soap

devours the last trace of hunger off the world.

Faces in the distance, growling stomachs,

Needy people in other lands,

hands reaching to the emptiness. Neglect.

I have no defense:

Guilt of polluting, of accumulating selfish clutter,

of killing fauna and flora.

I stand convicted for the pain I have inflicted

in the world around me.

Come now my plea:

Pen and paper out of the straightened drawer,

Words out of my soul:

Sentenced to take action,

My numbness I must let go.

 

 

 (11/14/08)

 

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redbloodink commented on Motion

01-27-2010

another awwwww inspiring write....... The things that we could do with out...... I know I can do with out much in my life anymore...... nice write.... great message .... red

dhunigirl commented on Motion

01-25-2010

Come now my plea: Pen and paper out of the straightened drawer, Words out of my soul: Thoughtful, well written, describes my feelings at times

mariadapoesia

01/27/2010

Thank for taking the time to read my poem and leave your comment. It makes it worth while to let out my cry!

dhunigirl

01/28/2010

When I read your poetry, I did read a few, very revealing, I feel as if I am listening to your heart tell the sad stories of your life. You use poetry as an outlet for many emotions. The story is there in each, I liked that. A while back, a friend suggested I begin a practice of writing every day. There was an exercise given that I still often use to work through things. Writing now has expanded on its own in my life. I now am more satisfied with my writing, If you want to try it here is the exercise. The suggestion is to write about something you know nothing about. The process of the exercise is one week. During which time you do some research on the subject you have chosen, including asking people about what they think about your subject, research it briefly on the internet, and look it up in the dictionary. During this 1 week process, quietly sit and breathe for three to five minutes before you begin to write each day. Try to write at the same time of day each day. Consciously communicate to the place inside you where the divine lives. Begin writing: 1 paragraph about Affirmations to the divine self within as an author. 1 paragraph about Gratitude for the talent to achieve your writing goals. 1 paragraph about the subject you chose. Reveal what you have learned both physical and spiritual. Enjoy!

mariadapoesia

01/28/2010

I Dhunigirl, thanks for the tip on the writing exercise. I'll try it out. I usually write every day as a way to empty myself and my thoughts. It's always great to learn of new mechanisms to help one's creativity. The one you described seems to me like it is yoga inspired. Thanks again for your consideration!

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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Outside 3
Summer 2
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