Moving from a World of Discontentment

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    I did this just for the fun of it and sent it to a lovely friend of mine who lives in Australia
    http://www.mixpod.com/playlist/30933042

     

    Moving from a World of Discontentment

    Every once in awhile I have do do something just for the fun of it. This happens to be one of those times. It's all on audio, please enjoy.

    The link for my audio is on my
    commentary at the top of this page.

    I'm moving from a world called discontentment into a world called contentment.

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    SavVySam commented on Moving from a World of Discontentment

    11-21-2009

    Hello BDC~ My turn to have a read or listen as the case may be! this certainly adds another new dimension to the world of poetry, here on OP. I found your poem to be more than just amusing, there is heavy dose of reality behind what you say. I believe in living with intention and yours is clear...to live with contentment...pretty significant goal! Good for you! Thanks for sharing your style and mirth!
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    dahlusion commented on Moving from a World of Discontentment

    11-19-2009

    Your poetry is cute and quirky in a funny shallow sort of way…
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    BigDaddyCash

    11/19/2009

    Thank you however the message is far from shallow.

    Hampton commented on Moving from a World of Discontentment

    11-19-2009

    Very creative and the message is simple and clear as a bell. Nice video.
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    BigDaddyCash

    11/19/2009

    Thank you my friend, sometimes when I write I close all doors and let my fingers to all the work. Only the shadow knows what might pop up. Anyway I give merit to your kind words. LOL, BDC

    mamasan commented on Moving from a World of Discontentment

    11-19-2009

    wow what a treat this video is and without the commercials (rofl). Thank you as I call you 'king of rhymes' your video is timely and sure motivates me to find the joy and bliss that abounds here and now. Thanks.............
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    BigDaddyCash

    11/19/2009

    Comments like yours are the force that motivates me. You know Mamasan something accomplished without friends is meaningless. Good friends should be nurtured, cultivated and watered with love. LOL, BDC

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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