Music Box

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    Music Box

     I have a music box
    You want to hear it play?
    Please listen to it Ken
    don’t turn away

    Ive kept it with me
    It was meant for you
    It sounds so lonely
    Just like you do

    I know you’ve forgotten
    Cause its been a while
    My name is Yuri
    I use to make you smile

    Everything changed now
    Your not the same
    You forgot everything
    Even your own name

    You made me a promise Ken
    Do you remember?
    It was when my mother left
    That youd be with me forever

    Listen to the song ken
    And tell me why
    You left me by myself
    now your going to die

    You’re my best friend
    God doesn’t need you
    Hes taken everyone
    And now you too

    When the angels come
    Please tell them no
    Id die without you
    For I need you more

    No matters what happens
    Ill always be by your side
    While the music box plays
    I slept while you cried

                           (K_P)

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    sevyn7 commented on Music Box

    01-27-2011

    God takes the one's that we love, and need the most sometimes, but the music in our hearts will always have a song for them. Great Write, I must say this one resonated with me. Excellent write. Dave
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    killingP13

    02/03/2011

    thank you so much...your right i could always hear their song..

    Patman34 commented on Music Box

    11-07-2010

    I wrote a song once called music box, which was more about a girl who lived in the music box(as in her own world) in which she doesn't need me, but tell her that the world is empty and the only one who's left is me. But this brings about a much darker look on the music box, and I love how you did it, great!
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    killingP13

    12/03/2010

    i would love to hear your song :)

    SuperChick62 commented on Music Box

    09-24-2010

    "I slept while you cried." I think the entire poem truly sums up in that one line. To be at peace whilst another is not, such guilt, such loneliness to wake in the morning to know the truth. A truly sad and touching poem. Good read, Good write, Good job.
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    killingP13

    09/24/2010

    thank you so much im glad you understand it

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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