Music within my Soul


  • wheelsal
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Music within my Soul

Music:  dances within my soul
sweet harmonies never alone
spurs songs into a golden lute
Blank canvas of the magic mute

silence speaks another note
finding flutes and horns to float
to fugues or canons and sway
waving wands conducters play

ballads live within my soul
vesper choirs carole and toll
music reveals a Master plan
sweet'ning the requiem of man.

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aysha commented on Music within my Soul


I really enjoyed your poem, Powerful piece.. rated a 10

DeepEclipse commented on Music within my Soul


Soft read. It is like it is part of another realm. Reaching a deeper part of the self. And sometimes causing feelings that words could never activate. Life is so interesting. Enjoyed this short piece.



Thank you so much. You made my day. Sally

nhorlandi commented on Music within my Soul


Wish I could hear a melody so that not only my soul could dance to the tune but also my heart.Good rhyme, rough but lovely.



Another thank you and wish you well.

ginga commented on Music within my Soul


sal, Such music to my ears this poem all its musical descriptions I love the requiem of man line. ginga



This was awhile back and I just found your comment. I thank you from the bottom of my heart late is better than not at all. Sally

devaamido commented on Music within my Soul


Beautiful word pictures describing the "music of the soul" available to anybody iling to get quiet enough to listen. nice piece of work.



Thank you to one of my favoite poets. Sally

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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Music within my Soul 12
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