My Brother, My Friend

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    My Brother, My Friend

    I followed you around when we were young
    I worshiped you; your praises I sung
    You were so much older and wiser and right
    You were my north star in my blackest night

    I broke your clowns when I was three
    I cried on your shoulder when I skinned my knee
    You were always there when I needed a friend
    You were the unwavering force that would not bend

    We sang in the kitchen, you and me
    Classic oldies, and ballads and Fiddle De Dee
    Summer time in soprano and bass
    Our own special concert in a warm homey place

    I grew to my teens and you threatened the boys
    Not letting them treat me like one of their toys
    Then off to war you went and I cried and I prayed
    That God would return you to us as we waited afraid.

    Home you came; we wed the loves of our life’s
    Through happiness, birth and the day to day strife’s
    We shared every one; burdens and bliss
    Even the death of our parents, we made it through this

    You moved across country but we still stayed in touch
    Birthdays, holidays, grandchildren and such
    But you called me tonight to give me the news
    That my best friend and my brother was singing the blues

    The prognosis wasn’t good; I cannot accept
    I cussed, and I paced and then I just wept
    Now I'm praying again that He'll answer my plea
    To help you, to cure you, to keep you with me.

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    Talloak commented on My Brother, My Friend

    05-31-2009

    Growing up with we love and going through the best of times and now facing again, your strength will be there for him. He's there for you too. Great write I just was reunited with a lost brother so I know your feelings.

    bandit1192 commented on My Brother, My Friend

    04-13-2009

    Beautiful poem, Lena. My prayers go out to both you and your brother. TS

    aggieprof commented on My Brother, My Friend

    04-10-2009

    You do a wonderful job of expressing your emotions and sharing them with your reader.

    sherriee1 commented on My Brother, My Friend

    04-10-2009

    I love this.My little brother was murdered in 1998.It hurts to lose a brother.I pray your will be ok.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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