MY DOG MAX

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    A POEM ABOUT MY GERMAN SHEPHERD DOG' MAX 'I TAUGHT HIM HOW TO STAY FOR A TREAT,BUT NOW THAT I AM TRYING TO GET HIM TO COME,HE REFUSES BECAUSE HE THINKS HE WON'T GET THE TREAT UNLESS HE STAYS.ALSO HE RUNS INTO EVERYTHING.HE'S MY BIG BABY.

    MY DOG MAX

     

    MY DOG MAX

    Max oh Max

    Maxi my pooh.

    You are so cute

    In all that you do.


    You're so big now

    Although a baby still.

    I will always love you

    Oh yes,I will.


    You always amaze me

    In everything you do.

    Although right now clumsy

    Like Winnie the Pooh.


    You went from eight weeks

    To six months old.

    Your the best German Shepherd

    That was ever sold.


    You love to lay down

    Right at my feet.

    Or follow me around

    Oh,you're so sweet.


    You're learning new tricks

    For you love a treat.

    As long as it's airconditioned

    And not in the heat.


    Right now you are clumsy

    You have two left feet.

    As you slide across the floor

    And land on your seat.


    Learning the command stay

    And stay you do.

    For when I say come

    You say,no can do.


    You want that treat

    For staying as I said.

    And you ain't budging


    Till that treat your fed.

    Linda Knight

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    gogant commented on MY DOG MAX

    10-03-2009

    Whether they are cute or ugly, dumb or smart, we love our old dog with all our heart.............................g.

    LindasLife

    10/03/2009

    Yes we do,and this is true,we love our dogs no matter what they do.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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