My Dream House

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  • kpeery09
  • "Never Compromise not even in the face of Armageddon"-Jackie Earle Haley as Rorschach from Watchmen movie

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This what I predict will happen when me and my girlfriend are together and married.

My Dream House

I enter a blue house,
As I enter I hear singing from a beautiful voice.
I follow the voice as I follow the voice, I see roses painted blue and red on the walls...I came to a room in the room everything was painted blue except the painting of a woman holding a baby.
I followed the voice even more, leading me to another room I see the room painted in pink, with another woman painted on the wall smiling as she holds the baby.
I followed the voice even further into the hall, As I came to the last room the voice finished the song, the woman turned aroun with her beautiful black hair, piercing brown eyes, and her beautiful lips.
The woman said to me "I welcome you home my husband"
My repsonse to her is " I thank you my wife."

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bforibus commented on My Dream House

01-02-2010

this is a dream house. the surrealizing of it was definitely appreciated. it seemed so beautiful, i wanted this to be a home i dreamt of. thank you for the after-taste of this beautiful dish

petra commented on My Dream House

12-14-2009

very romantic, kp.......hope your reality lives up to ur dream!!

Rygar commented on My Dream House

12-14-2009

a beautiful dream... i hope it comes true for you man. nice write.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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