My Friends and Her

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    • jerseycrtz
    • Your the one for me, and I'm the one for you, take the both of us and we're the perfect two. <3

    Poem Commentary

    I love my friends. This isn't like usually write, but I just wanted to show my friends like I see them.

    My Friends and Her

    My friends are very dear to me
    and very close to my heart
    Each one has their own special way
    of helping me prepare for my life ahead

    One friend might still be here
    one day then not the next
    flighty with her friends and boys
    but she shows me that
    you have to put up with the thorns to get to the rose.

    two of my friends are cool
    theh has been there for me a couple times
    but yet underneath that sweetness
    is that sense of sour
    but they show me that
    Things aren't always what they seem.

    I have 2 very close friends
    who have always been there for me
    and are very dear to my heart.
    Even though I have ignored them
    they still care.
    I wish I had been better to them
    but they show me that
    No matter what you do, true friends are there for you through and through.

    There are those people
    that you thought were nice
    but when they got the dirt on you that they needed
    they show you that they didn't really care.
    They pulled one over my head
    but they show me that
    People might seem as sweet as a lollipop, but you never know when you'll find the sour gum in the middle.

    Everyone else is basically my aquantainces
    I don't really talk
    they don't really care.
    We're not being mean
    we just are off in our own worlds
    sure we might talk every once in a while
    but they show me that
    you need to do unto others as you would have them do unto you.

    Then there is one special girl
    who has really touched my heart.
    It was just in this past year
    but I don't know what I would do without her.
    She's sweet
    kind
    funny
    random
    Quirky
    and anything else you can think of.
    She has all of these people inside her
    and without her
    My life would nto be complete.
    She shows me that
    You have to learn to LOVE.

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    BentlyB commented on My Friends and Her

    05-29-2010

    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I love ya sis ur awesome

    kenzi32 commented on My Friends and Her

    05-20-2010

    woooooooooooo i am her :D sparkling monkeys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    zoeyvlad101 commented on My Friends and Her

    04-29-2010

    i don't know you but i want 2 know who is "her" i'm just curious i suppose you are in Edinburgh Middle School. I'm in Indian Creek we beated your school in track last week. LOL . I would like 2 be friends with u plz. :)

    Nibula5 commented on My Friends and Her

    04-29-2010

    :|

    Rhymer commented on My Friends and Her

    04-26-2010

    I like the way you broke the frienships down, to acquaintances and so on. I think a lot of us can relate to this poem. 10 from me.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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