my garden visitor's

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    while working in the garden, and talking to a few of my friends how stopped by to chat

    my garden visitor's

    old Mrs Jay stop to say thanks for
    " the apple's, and yesterdays bread "
    " your welcome, oh don't you know,
    and thanks for your song "
    as she started our lesson, on the love
    and that of her mate, and our Father
    oh don't you know, with a wink in her eye
    " I saw what you planted, can't wait tells it's Fall "
    with a flutter of wings she rose in a blink
    for Mothers be busy, oh don't you know

    old Mrs. Wren, wanted a puddle she needed a bath
    that old Busy Bee, gave out an earful
    " oh you should of done this earlier "
    " yes Mother Bee, for what could I say "
    " such a big garden this year " " can't wait tell it's summer "
    Molly lizard did say " I agree oh don't you know, and your
    tail is doing nicely, and know one will know and I scolded
    those boy's oh don't you know "
    " it's nice to be able to stretch out my wings and be free of
    my cocoon, and soar in the wind " Lady Monarch
    " is that parsley I see, oh you'll spoil me "
    " it's a pleasure, for a I love your dance oh don't you know "
     

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    SavVySam commented on my garden visitor's

    03-21-2010

    The characters of a Spring garden are all so well cast in this play, each knows their parts, and play them to perfection! Very enjoyable write!

    Teardrops commented on my garden visitor's

    03-20-2010

    Lets see a bee and and a lizard and my favoirte a butterfly talking hey sounds like the quilting bee here only ladies in it and your insects make more sence thanks Marie

    icu2 commented on my garden visitor's

    03-19-2010

    I like it. It's playfully humorous, especially in an endearing way...and as Mary said, just in time for spring.

    Mareann commented on my garden visitor's

    03-18-2010

    This a new favorite, just in time for spring... I am oh so inpired now! TY, Mary

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