My girl, my woman, my lover

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    My girl, my woman, my lover

    I could see her bright eyes,
    dark brown irises blends
    with her crown flowing through
    behind her naked back

    Deep dimples when she smiles,
    marks her face gay as bright as day,
    teeth as white as ivory keys
    brings odd music to my head

    The choice of my heart,
    right at that moment I saw her,
    can’t understand why so drastic,
    and I wonder could this be love?

    Yes I believe so, dying to meet her,
    she’s my girl, my woman but
    not yet as lover only as friend,
    soon she would be part of me

    There was a day under a bright summer sun,
    surprised to see her embraces me hard,
    yellow ribbon on her beige hair,
    soft as gentle breeze turns me on

    Astonished of what she did,
    she knew by the looks of my eyes,
    love is just next door, am the boy,
    you’re my girl, my woman and my lover

    Ay, am yours forever but look up,
    dark clouds hovered over suddenly,
    unexpectedly flashes of light, thunder,
    and water drains out blood, frail, scarlet

    And when I looked at her again,
    my girl, my woman and my lover yet
    dampness made her slips away,
    too late the ecstasy totally gone now

    Whimper not, voices of wind whispers,
    for she’s there somewhere, nearby,
    I know one day she’d be back,
    my girl, my woman and my lover

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    icu2 commented on My girl, my woman, my lover

    10-19-2009

    So wistful, and yet hopeful in the face of adversity....I love the flow, and cadence. You are a wonderful poet sir.

    nhorlandi

    10/21/2009

    thanks icu2, I'll return the favor...cheers

    PRober commented on My girl, my woman, my lover

    07-18-2009

    well... a love lost they say, is better than no love at all... doesn't make it any easier though, does it? Nice poem

    nhorlandi

    07/19/2009

    I agree with you in all angles, thanks

    wheelsal commented on My girl, my woman, my lover

    07-07-2009

    This is great and you woman will be a lucky woman someday. You have such an interesting bio. and good luck with you novels.

    nhorlandi

    07/08/2009

    thanks again, mate. I'll let you know when she's back in my arms.

    optimistic commented on My girl, my woman, my lover

    05-07-2009

    Some times woman, Some times woman. I don't know well this is an excellent poem as well I love reading them

    nhorlandi

    07/08/2009

    You're right mate, women in general are unpredictable like a rushing storm. Thanks for the commentary.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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