MY HEART HEARS YOU

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    Dedicated to someone who touched my heart completely and quite by surprise....this is one of many expressions of love....but especially 
    for you, you know who you are!

    MY HEART HEARS YOU

    Some  say  it  to   be  cyclical
    Pulling  tricks  on  two
    Mysterious  signals of a heart’s  twitching
    These  are  just  some  of the  ingredients
    That  causes  this  pleasurable  burning
    Of  Hearts  Singing  a  Song that  lovers  hum
    The  throbbing is  ever  increasing
    When  thoughts of love  is released  in
    Melodies  that  ring  clarity  within
    This  feeling has  me  enraptured
    I surrender and  give  in, captured
    Prisons  without  bars have  imprisoned me
    For  love has  given  me  visions of  you  and  I
    This  match is  spiritual, mystical  and  residual
    Physical  is  last  to  ignite, already  feeling
    Delight  in  the  rhythm of  the  heart’s  song
    Singing to  me  in  octaves  and  waves
    No  one  else  can  hear  or  see  unless they
    Spy’d  my  heart’s  inner  workings
    calling  to  thee  and  with  your  answer,
    we  are  now dancers in the  Ballroom of
    Expectations  of  Serious Amore!
    You  have  touched me,  and  played  my  instrument
    Recovery  is  of  no  consequence,  Loving  you
    Is  my  recompence,  unadulterated  purely
    It  is  my  heart’s  song, sung  straight  to  you
    As  your  heart  answers  and  sings  back  to  me
    Can  you  feel  it,  its  quite  incredible
    This  duet  sung  between  two  hearts  beating  as
    one!  The  heart  knows  no  boundaries,  so  I
    cannot question, as  the   heart is  speaking,
    it is  in  control as  it is  the  teacher  doing  the  teaching
    I  can  only  listen silently swaying  to  heart’s  Acappella
    to  your  heart’s  symphony, lifting  me   to   heights  unknown,
    as  I  travel  to  the  sounds so  clear  as  when  you heart is
    singing  to  mine!
    Some  say  it  to   be  cyclical
    Pulling  tricks  on  two
    Mysterious  signals of a heart’s  twitching
    These  are  just  some  of the  ingredients
    That  causes  this  pleasurable  burning
    Of  Hearts  Singing  a  Song that  lovers  hum
    The  throbbing is  ever  increasing
    When  thoughts of love  is released  in
    Melodies  that  ring  clarity  within
    This  feeling has  me  enraptured
    I surrender and  give  in, captured
    Prisons  without  bars have  imprisoned me
    For  love has  given  me  visions of  you  and  I
    This  match is  spiritual, mystical  and  residual
    Physical  is  last  to  ignite, already  feeling
    Delight  in  the  rhythm of  the  heart’s  song
    Singing to  me  in  octaves  and  waves
    No  one  else  can  hear  or  see  unless they
    Spy’d  my  heart’s  inner  workings
    calling  to  thee  and  with  your  answer,
    we  are  now dancers in the  Ballroom of
    Expectations  of  Serious Amore!
    You  have  touched me,  and  played  my  instrument
    Recovery  is  of  no  consequence,  Loving  you
    Is  my  recompence,  unadulterated  purely
    It  is  my  heart’s  song, sung  straight  to  you
    As  your  heart  answers  and  sings  back  to  me
    Can  you  feel  it,  its  quite  incredible
    This  duet  sung  between  two  hearts  beating  as
    one!  The  heart  knows  no  boundaries,  so  I
    cannot question, as  the   heart is  speaking,
    it is  in  control as  it is  the  teacher  doing  the  teaching
    I  can  only  listen silently swaying  to  heart’s  Acappella
    to  your  heart’s  symphony, lifting  me   to   heights  unknown,
    as  I  travel  to  the  sounds so  clear  as  when  you heart is
    singing  to  mine!

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    littleonyx commented on MY HEART HEARS YOU

    08-29-2009

    This is an exquisite piece, friend. It speaks loudly as to what is in the heart, and what is possible when someone speaks from it. It is, as I said, an absolutely, completely, utterly exquisite piece!

    SILKYTWEED

    09/01/2009

    Thank you, my heart wrote this one completely....

    Tempy commented on MY HEART HEARS YOU

    07-17-2009

    this is to say simply the best i don't think you could make this any better if you tried absolute and perfect

    SILKYTWEED

    07/17/2009

    Thank you Tempy, I look forward to reading some of your writes...Thank you so much!

    ChinaLewis commented on MY HEART HEARS YOU

    07-08-2009

    this is....wow....love it....songs of the heart..

    SILKYTWEED

    07/09/2009

    Thank you ChinaLewis, I'm glad you felt this, as it was composed entirely from a loving heart....thanks again!

    FlowerGirl commented on MY HEART HEARS YOU

    07-03-2009

    Wow! SILKYTWEED, You Really Out Did Yourself With This Romantic Write! You..Have Truly Touched Me..More Than Words Can Say..... I Am Seldom Speechless.....Smile.... This Write..Expresses, Passion, True And Honest Connectiong, Mystery, A Proven Fantasy Of A Love, That, I Can Only Dream .Of Having...Some Day! To Have And Hold My True Heart's Desires!.. That Yearning Love And Everlasting Fire! Thank You For Sharing.... It's Beautiful........ FlowerGirl,

    SILKYTWEED

    07/06/2009

    Its written from my heart totally....what a magnificent power when love is present and full...and this is such and expression, thank you FlowerGirl, the heart has spoken (smile)

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