My Incomplet Wedding

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My Incomplet Wedding

Looking in the mirror as I got ready
For the happiest day
of my life I saw
Her face as she smiled
Her dark hair dusted with gray and her eyes seem
Older some how
Last I saw her
She was still younger looking
Her eyes so full of life yet to come
Oh, how I missed her that day
And my younger siblings
So sourly missed and yet
As hard as I tried to hold back tears
Sure to mess the beauty on my face
They would not stay
While I looked at my husband
Standing beside me
All the world seemed at peace
For a brief moment
A kiss
Turn to our friends and family
Smiles and applause
Hugs and best wishes
As the sunsets
Pictures and talk
It's a happy day yet I hurt inside
For the family that just couldn't come
Share this day
As well as family I never had a chance to meet
And the friends that couldn't come

Its just so incomplet

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Musicmynded1 commented on My Incomplet Wedding

09-20-2011

i would only add one simple thing to the very ending of all of this... "Incomplete"

Tempestlady commented on My Incomplet Wedding

09-17-2011

Such was my fear at my wedding that so few would show, that we eloped. 26 years ago. Oh, well, their loss....Nice write. Write on.........Tlady

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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