My inspirational song

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song lyrics that jump out at me and inspire my happiness

My inspirational song

my immortal heart beats
 because of the climb
 since there aint no mountain high enough
that will keep you
 from being able to lean on me
 because guess wat here comes the sun 
you will stand by me 
feeling be joyful, joyful
 you are my everything and you can tell him, because of you
 you were able to say
you dont own me 

I will never journey to the past for you again

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girlygirl1234 commented on My inspirational song

03-06-2011

oooh i like it alot hun...you did really good very inspirational good job

PoetWithCancer commented on My inspirational song

02-12-2011

I like the whole poem, but the first line I really love: "My immortal heart beats." I love that line. 10 from me. --Michael LP, Mr. Poet

Lunabella commented on My inspirational song

02-10-2011

Awwww i love it sweetheart it made me smiles :) well that and its cute :P

winterkou commented on My inspirational song

02-10-2011

an inspirational write , with great deep meaning , enjoyed the read.

am2anangel commented on My inspirational song

02-09-2011

I liked this one. Short but with a big message. well done. -Tonya

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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