MY LIFE

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    MY LIFE

     MY LIFE IS PRECIOUS.

    MY TIME IS TOO.

    TOO PRECIOUS TO WASTE ON  YOU.

    MY GIFT IS PRECIOUS, IF ONLY TO ME.

    MY LIFE IS UPLIFTED BY THE WORDS I SEE.

    THEY LIFT ME HIGHER THAN THE SKY.

    TO A PLACE ONLY THE MIND'S EYE CAN SEE.

    MY LIFE IS FULL. YOU DON'T COMPLETE ME.

    I AM WHOLE ALONE.

    MY LIFE IS COMPLICATED, BUT IT'S MINE.

    MY LIFE WILL BE CHRONICLED THROUGH VERSE AND

    RHYME.

    MY LIFE IS PRECIOUS.

    MY LIFE IS TOO GOOD FOR YOU.

    TRINA N. THOMAS-EADDY

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    REGINA2 commented on MY LIFE

    11-04-2010

    We don't need a man to complete our lives, although it is nice to have one. You are a strong woman like myself. We will get by as we always have.
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    BlackButterfly1 commented on MY LIFE

    11-03-2010

    "MY LIFE IS FULL. YOU DON'T COMPLETE ME. I AM WHOLE ALONE." Love it.
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    11/04/2010

    Thank you. I'm glad you found something to like in that one. I was feeling a little angry. Thanks for reading and commenting..........E

    Sx9 commented on MY LIFE

    10-21-2010

    yes we all share precious life,we would think so,,so yes this piece reveal your inner concern that life mean something,,
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/23/2010

    All lives are precious but not all lives are uplifting. You have to know when to drop the dead weight. Thanks for reading and commenting........E

    Chaos128 commented on MY LIFE

    10-19-2010

    Clarity, your middle name ha ha. I don't know if I'm all the way down with the message, though. You're entitled to realize, and act upon the fact, that a negative influence is not in your best interest (I'm so glad you see yourself that way) but don't use your valuable energy to forcefully invalidate it. Not only does it waste resources you could be using to more constructive purposes, but it's unnecessary. Use your power to take you up, not to take somebody else down, because then you gotta Take yourself down with 'em : )
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/19/2010

    I agree to a certain extent. This is more an affirmation than a take down but i do get your point. Self construction and not destruction. Point taken. Thanks for reading and commenting...........E

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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