My Love

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    • reyjamiei
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    My Love

    My love’s like a sweet melody,
    The wind whispers in your ear.
    My love’s like a symphony,
    Your heart longs to hear.

    My love’s like a tranquil star,
    Whose glow lights up the night sky.
    My love’s like a raging sea,
    Whose waves engulf you passing by.

    My love’s like the April showers,
    You’ve waited for so long.
    My love’s like the May flowers,
    That inspire beautiful bird songs.

    My love’s like a gentle rain,
    That comes to ease my pain.

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    Paradice21 commented on My Love

    11-30-2009

    Have not read but a few but this right here would have to be one of my favs so far.... Seems so passionately ‎‎thought out and written!! Again some Wonderful rhyming and I really love the analogies you used!! ‎This is Beautiful!! I will but this in the archives of My Favorites! It's ‎

    Maleficent commented on My Love

    11-19-2009

    Who wouldn't swoon over this one? written with much affection... nice! ~☯

    reyjamiei

    11/26/2009

    Thank you Maleficent...

    Marsink commented on My Love

    11-16-2009

    I like this, your definition of what love is! Great use of simile and phrased imagery.

    reyjamiei

    11/19/2009

    Thank you Marsink...

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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