My One Love

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    • kpeery09
    • "Never Compromise not even in the face of Armageddon"-Jackie Earle Haley as Rorschach from Watchmen movie

    Poem Commentary

    This poem is dedicated to my girlfriend because I love her, she is my whole world the one who helped heal every bit of me that was broken.

    My One Love

    My one love, you were so far away from me.
    When we first met I was just some man who didn't mean anything to your heart.
    As I told you more about me you started to understand what I've been feeling.
    You then gave me your heart and didn't look back.
    You are so far away, but your words that you write to me are like a piece of music that has never been played, a poem that has never been read, a score of music that has never been composed, you my one love, you are that angel that God sent to save me from my damnation and bring me salvation.
    I looked into your eyes and I saw what you saw in me, a man who is filled with sadness who needs love.
    You gave me love, and I gave you a true man.
    My one love, you are the one that I plan to marry,and to give you a loving family to.
    I love you my one love, forever, and for all eternity.

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    BikemanRJ commented on My One Love

    03-21-2010

    A marvelous work of poetry well written and we all need angels in our lives to place us on the right path that leads to salvation really felt the love in the poem God Bless BikemanRJ
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    Dancer022597 commented on My One Love

    12-26-2009

    I love it! Totally love it! Ur gf is really lucky to have a great guy like u! Awesome job and dont lose her!
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    goodbyegirl commented on My One Love

    12-26-2009

    this is a sweet poem, the power of love triumphs over all. good write
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    whiteoleander commented on My One Love

    12-01-2009

    i love this piece my husband is in afghanistan and he writes like this to me .. you know you have a strong piece when it touchs many
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    kpeery09

    12/02/2009

    thank you for the comment that means alot to me

    Helios commented on My One Love

    11-26-2009

    I am truely touched by this piece because it remines me of the things I did to prove my love.
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    kpeery09

    11/30/2009

    thanks I'm glad that I was able to help.

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