My Open Broken Heart

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    My Open Broken Heart

    Never have I known a love which helped me rise so high above
    The sadness void of gladness as accomplished recently by she
    I surmised that I would die alone, but a falling sinking stone
    Until you came ascending, bending space and time 'til we collide
    Emotions going flowing in throughout my open broken heart
    No longer closed exposed this very day for all the world to see
    Slithering across my pain now withering, you're crawling back again
    Kissing, carressing, blessing me while loving, smiling with your eyes
    However many ways you phrase 'I love you' sets my heart ablaze
    A fire burning, churning, rapidly melting all my pains debris
    Our only obstacle is time, together over we will climb
    Close your eyes and you'll forsee, so happy our days will be
    Since the day it came to pass you found the combination at last
    To open up my broken heart, please know i've loved  you from the start

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    Olan01 commented on My Open Broken Heart

    10-23-2010

    This is a great poem, spoken for your heart and an instant classic. Love, peace and freedom, Olan
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    phatdaddee commented on My Open Broken Heart

    10-11-2010

    Loved the rhythm of this poem. When a poem flows so smoothly it makes it so much easier for the reader to follow. Keep up the good work.
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    Hampton commented on My Open Broken Heart

    09-16-2010

    Expression that comes from the heart. Well done.....................Hampton
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    Kanicki commented on My Open Broken Heart

    09-09-2010

    Spence wishing you a love that liberates an open broken heart; flowing freely as your poetic words; a love that blankets every part of your being healing all that is broken and yet unfulfilled. Beautiful passionate and resonating poetry.
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    AmadeusEx commented on My Open Broken Heart

    09-04-2010

    so smooth, i never had to breathe once, just fell into it, exquisite write spence
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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