My Open Broken Heart

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My Open Broken Heart



Never have I known a love which helped me rise so high above
The sadness void of gladness as accomplished recently by she
I surmised that I would die alone, but a falling sinking stone
Until you came ascending, bending space and time 'til we collide
Emotions going flowing in throughout my open broken heart
No longer closed exposed this very day for all the world to see
Slithering across my pain now withering, you're crawling back again
Kissing, carressing, blessing me while loving, smiling with your eyes
However many ways you phrase 'I love you' sets my heart ablaze
A fire burning, churning, rapidly melting all my pains debris
Our only obstacle is time, together over we will climb
Close your eyes and you'll forsee, so happy our days will be
Since the day it came to pass you found the combination at last
To open up my broken heart, please know i've loved  you from the start

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Olan01 commented on My Open Broken Heart

10-23-2010

This is a great poem, spoken for your heart and an instant classic. Love, peace and freedom, Olan

phatdaddee commented on My Open Broken Heart

10-11-2010

Loved the rhythm of this poem. When a poem flows so smoothly it makes it so much easier for the reader to follow. Keep up the good work.

Hampton commented on My Open Broken Heart

09-16-2010

Expression that comes from the heart. Well done.....................Hampton

Kanicki commented on My Open Broken Heart

09-09-2010

Spence wishing you a love that liberates an open broken heart; flowing freely as your poetic words; a love that blankets every part of your being healing all that is broken and yet unfulfilled. Beautiful passionate and resonating poetry.

AmadeusEx commented on My Open Broken Heart

09-04-2010

so smooth, i never had to breathe once, just fell into it, exquisite write spence

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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