My Other Luv

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    My Other Luv

    Come to me Melinda,
    Empty arms waited for long
    To feel n’ hold you tight
    As nev’r befor’, Oh sweet,
    Come to me Melinda,
    Want to touch yo’r face,
    Sooo cute, sooo adorable,
    The smoothness o’ yo’r skin,
    Hold yo’r slenda waist,
    Now yo’r in my arms, sweetie,
    What a feelin’
    A luvin’ feelin’
    Want some more o’ yo’
    Yo’r smiles as sweet as the first
    Nev’r mind stay luvel’er than she
    Luv to run my fingers ul’ ov’r yo’
    Yo’r flowing jet black hair,
    Sooo silky n’ sooo soft, oh sweet
    Yo’r pouting wet lips,
    Long’d to kiss yo’
    Slide my arm round yo’
    Nev’r to free yo’ again, sweetie,
    Come to me Melinda,
    Not to fear, but…
    Put yo’r head ov’r my chest
    Listen to my heart beat
    Yo’r ol’ daddy cool, oh sweet,
    Come to me Melinda,
    Don’t go away yet for…
    Second luv sweet’r than first
    Didn’t yo’ know that?

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    PRober commented on My Other Luv

    07-23-2009

    well, another good write... interesting though... why the blonde's picture...when you sing praises of her "jet black hair"? lol!

    nhorlandi

    07/23/2009

    sorry mate, I don't have any other photo except this one. I wish she wears a black wig, but she says no, I want to look natural. Well, that's her.

    optimistic commented on My Other Luv

    05-14-2009

    very heart filling I enjoyed reading this poem very descriptive

    orsonav commented on My Other Luv

    04-26-2009

    Very Strong emotional poem.

    Necy commented on My Other Luv

    04-26-2009

    Well, my rating shows

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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