My "Sanctuary"

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    My "Sanctuary"

    It's where I dream

    the place where I write,

    a bare light bulb handing from the ceiling.

    Wooden floor, covered in dust,

    some crumbled papers, left forgotten.

    I manage to deal with it.

     

    If I didn't have this place

    I think i'd slowly go insane, but I won't.

    It must remain here, hidden.

     

    My mind can't stand it.

    My heart tries to avoid it.

    My pen...absolutely needs it.

    I hate the noise, why would I need it?

    I don't think anyone would want to be in this place.

     

    Then the hour comes,

    the clock strikes midnight, up to my

    sanctuary”

    I go.

     

    The floorboards are creaking again.” I say to myself.

    After a couple hours, I come down,

    my papers all written on.

     

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    dahlusion commented on My "Sanctuary"

    01-18-2013

    This is simply real poetry with no strings attached. "My pen...absolutely needs it" — oh, can this poet relate to this line! Bravo! —smiles))

    sk8erpoet

    01/18/2013

    Thank you, very much.

    nam1292 commented on My "Sanctuary"

    01-16-2013

    where you wait for me to share our lives and dreams there do u find the courage to fight ur fears there you find your loving dears

    jenifer commented on My "Sanctuary"

    10-20-2012

    i know of what you write , there are times writing has saved me in one way or another.

    sk8erpoet

    10/20/2012

    Me too, it's saved me from a lot.

    petra commented on My "Sanctuary"

    10-01-2012

    Very emotive in some parts....well written..........................

    sk8erpoet

    10/01/2012

    thanks a lot.

    lisaner commented on My "Sanctuary"

    09-30-2012

    This is so good! A sojourn in your "sanctuary" and you emerge with your "papers all written on." Great!

    sk8erpoet

    09/30/2012

    Thank you very much

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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