My story

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My story

You wish you can fly,
Make your dreams fly high,
please don't cry,
look up in the sky,
'Cause when ever you need a hand,
you've got your family and your friends.

It's the best time in my life,
I've searched Mr. Right.

I won my fight,
I lost my right,
My enemies still bite.

Everything would be alright,
take the open doors on the right,
it's a message,

a message to a new life.

With butterflies, and rainbows,
full of green meadows,
and with my head up high,
thinkin' nothing but the sky,
my father sure is watching,
he sees me walking,
through the streets,
nothin' but cars and concrete.

Everyone says, "Hello",
no fights,
no threats,
But I would tell the world,
I care.
I care for my family, my life,
my closest friends,
and my father up above.

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bigguy commented on My story

08-17-2009

Ola Mia!! Keep writting and work your gift. I'm 68 and a grandfather of 6. One is twelve, a boy, a sportsaholic and loving. I love to see young people fine life worth wrting about. You can share a perspective that whe old and ( "wise"?? ) can use in their own poems. You have promise in your work, never doublt yourself. Write always from your heart and make them part of you. All the best!! Papa

Dreamer123

08/17/2009

Thanks bigguy thank you for your nice comment :D thanks alot :D :)) and I wil :D :P lol God Bless

Lolee commented on My story

07-26-2009

I love this poem, it tells a lot about you, and where your loyalties lay. I think it is deserving of a 10. Thanks for sharing.

Dreamer123

07/26/2009

thanks alot girl you rock! god bless

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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