My Thief

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My Thief

Sometimes love is cruel and unfair…..but sometimes loving someone is the greatest thing that’s ever happened to someone even if its not going how they wish it would….

Loving you is the greatest thing that’s ever happened to me…..and the cruelest…

I’ve never loved someone that I’ve never met before….someone I’ve never held in my arms or seen right in front of me….why have you stolen my heart?.....what kind of thief are you? How could a stranger walk past my very soul without me knowing? Who are you? A thief? Or just a friend borrowing my heart, for a while…..are you going to give me my heart back? Or are you a friend that keeps what they’ve borrowed? I need to know…. Ill die without a heart if I don’t have one to takes its place….like your own…

I have to tell you though….I don’t give things back….I fall so in love with them I always tend to keep them with me forever…. So choose wisely when your cradling my heart gently with you because ill be watching you until your heart is safely in my chest….

I miss you my thief….I hope you haven’t gone after some other heart because you still have mine……..

 

K_P

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Qualin commented on My Thief

05-15-2011

good write daughter,just remember a thief is never satisfied when he gets away with one...the next is easier,and I would hate to join him in prison for stealing your heart!!!!! Qualin

killingP13

05/19/2011

im glad to hear from you :D thank you!

sevyn7 commented on My Thief

02-15-2011

Another great write, I wish most people thought like this. Your soul, and heart is one of a kind.

killingP13

02/15/2011

awwwww

danmartyjake1 commented on My Thief

02-12-2011

I like the story, the writer weaves in this poem. I think it's good to be honest in your work and that's refreshing for the reader.

killingP13

02/12/2011

im glad you liked it

redbloodink commented on My Thief

02-12-2011

Killing this is a very intense write..... I would love to give my heart to a lady one day and for her to give hers to me so we may intertwine..... great write and thanks for sharing .... red

killingP13

02/12/2011

thank you so much

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

killingP13’s Poems (19)

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My Thief 4
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My Mother The Warrior 4
MY FRIEND MARIE 4
MY LOVE CURE 2
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