My Walk

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  • Jedi4Jesus
  • haven't been on the sight for awhile but had written a couple poems i'd like to invite everyone to read, What it's all about and You Promised

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Thursday, February 5, 2009 at 12:47pm

My Walk

Early on this morning as I walked and prayed to God,
I found it very difficult to my King would I applaud.
But as I considered further how critical the situation,
I beckoned His call and sought from Him a miracle persuasion.
I confessed my sin so plainly and shared my griefs and fears.
I could not hold it in no more, my eyes burst into tears.
I want my wife my Lord!! I said, I cannot let her go.
I know you have more work for her, a lot more seed to sow.
But as I climbed the mountain and back down again once more.
I thought an angel beckoned her from Heavens open door.
Were waiting here for you my dear, if you should get the call.
I grasped so hard to bring her back, I must have gave my all.
But then I remembered the Gospel, the Good News of days of old.
And how it made more sense to me at 23 years old.
His Word had spoken to me that we would never part.
When He said, "take my yoke upon you and learn from me, for I am gentle and humble in heart."

Ramil

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Reallady65 commented on My Walk

06-21-2009

Truth of the flesh cultivated by faith. Pain, suffering, longing, prayer and supplication. Recognition that God's will is the best and in that I shall find peace for my soul. Your work is a blessing... please continue to share.

jademelissa74 commented on My Walk

06-21-2009

Wow! An incredible treasure at hand. Thank you for sharing your work with us! This a brilliant piece. Acceptance and Truth all in one! God bless you! Great Job!

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Jedi4Jesus’s Poems (16)

Title Comments
Title Comments
LOVE 1
You Promised 1
What it's all about 0
THE DAY 0
I miss my mommy 2
Recovery 9
It is well 0
Grief 2
Why 4
Home Coming 2
Deeply Rooted 5
Quiet Desperation 3
Take Captive 2
My Walk 2
Bed Time Story 5
The Call 11