MYSTIQUE

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    MYSTIQUE
    WISDOM IS SIMPLE TO THE HONEST MAN
    THOSE WHO DO EVIL MUST TAKE THEIR STAND.
    WHERE WILL IT LEAD I CAN'T TELL
    MAYBE NEAR THE GATES OF HELL.
    THE HIGHWAY TO HEAVEN IS LIGHT
    THE MOON IS NEW AND BRIGHT.
    THE STARS ARE OLD AND DULL
    TWINKLING LIKE TEETH IN DEATH'S SKULL.

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    Laurawrites commented on MYSTIQUE

    08-26-2009

    I also like this one.. Short and sweet, but right to the point.
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    PRIESTESSMACK

    08/29/2009

    THIS WAS A NEW STYLE FOR ME. I WAS RELATING TO ST. FRANCIS AND ACCEPTING DEATH AS A PART OF LIFE.

    jacknife commented on MYSTIQUE

    08-06-2009

    coooool! sounds like a kaballistic incantation abcd....
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    PRIESTESSMACK

    08/09/2009

    SOMETIMES I FEEL MYSTIC VIBES.

    dragonfly1023 commented on MYSTIQUE

    07-22-2009

    lines like "TWINKLING LIKE TEETH IN DEATH'S SKULL", show your talent PRIESTESSMACK. that one line paints a powerful image that makes this piece shine. great work.
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    PRIESTESSMACK

    07/24/2009

    THANK YOU FOR UNDERSTANDING.

    samuelj commented on MYSTIQUE

    02-02-2009

    Like the message in the words which is short and spicy....nice
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    PRIESTESSMACK

    07/03/2009

    I FELT LIKE I NEED TO EXPLAIN.

    elenaliz commented on MYSTIQUE

    01-26-2009

    this poem flows and rhymes well,and sends a good message.it is short and sweet.nice write.
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    PRIESTESSMACK

    07/03/2009

    I AM THE MYSTERIOUD WRITER THAT BEGS OF A SOLUTION.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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