Naked Love

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    Poem Commentary

    The curiously simple gesture towards healing between lovers and the vulnerability of this exchange is the most enticing experience for me. I attempted to capture that essence with "Naked Love".

    Naked Love
     Lying naked
     In the dark
     Exposed 
     I saw your un-dressed heart
     Knowing my power 
     Feeling no shame
     Devout 
     Reaching out to heal your pain
     Smoothing scars 
     Removing hidden jars 
     Embraced 
     Hearts on wings flutter afar 
     Simple advance 
     Symbolic chance 
     Romance 
     Tender love dance 
     Brings complete expanse 
     -M. Jacobs

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    countrypoet commented on Naked Love

    02-24-2010

    DanmartyJake, Thanks for sharing this most enjoyable powerfully sensual poem. The love and tenderness come through strongly in this very simple and beautiful poem. Terry
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    danmartyjake1

    02/24/2010

    thanks for your comments on" Naked Love". I appreciate your thoughts.

    BringMeBullets commented on Naked Love

    02-11-2010

    This is wonderful. I love the "hearts on wings flutter afar." This is a beautiful write. I love it.
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    danmartyjake1

    02/14/2010

    Thanks again, It's inspiring to be an inspiration to other writers and I hope that is what my poems do. All the Best!

    charles52 commented on Naked Love

    01-18-2010

    danmartyjake1: Great pace, moving me to the "complete expanse." Interesting way you write. Charles
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    danmartyjake1

    01/19/2010

    Charles, I am so thankful you are reading my poems and commenting on them. Thanks for your feedback.

    ginga commented on Naked Love

    01-12-2010

    WOW! The rhyming is the main naked theme here. And the beebop kind of rhythm. Cool! ginga
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    danmartyjake1

    01/13/2010

    Thanks, for bringing that to my attention, now I will re-read to understand the beebop feel. TY

    Madelynn commented on Naked Love

    01-12-2010

    Your work here makes my heart just thump alittle faster. You not only make a strong statement of passion, but also, of healing and love. This short little treasure, truely captures the essence of making love.-Maddi
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    danmartyjake1

    01/13/2010

    Thanks Maddi, I was afraid that because it loaded incorrectly on the site, that might hurt the chance of other poets reading it. Thanks for checking it out, looking past the form and commenting on it.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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