Neither a queen nor a slave

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Neither a queen nor a slave

  

Queen?

No she’s not

Slave?

No she’s not

But yes!

She was once a queen

Only in my heart

Not even a teenager yet

So naïve I was

Young in thought, younger in action

The older I grew, the lesser a queen she was

But no matter how far away she is 4rm being a queen

My heart seems to believe she is no slave

Left to my brain, I don’t care about her

Contrary to this, my heart’s apex lingers for HER

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dahlusion commented on Neither a queen nor a slave

11-02-2010

This poem delivers its message loud and clear by way of a poetic atmosphere that carries it smoothly to its ending. BRAVO !!!!!!!

Kayodinho commented on Neither a queen nor a slave

10-27-2010

I have an assignment to critic this poem. i need help please!

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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