NIECY'S FLOW

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NIECY'S FLOW

I write.....
chosen and challenged, I channel in ....... embracing this sea
feeling flirty and flighty, so relinquish to me a reservoir
securely I'm kept and I sit ....... reserved, taking in, listening, observing, processing and accessing rocking, coasting employing and journeying this ride oh no thank you to a splitting rift or an upsetting tide
streaming rivers make me wanna...... flow cause all too often with me intertwined my life jacket just ....... floats!
surprised my senses are infused cause normally i back away and excuse... me ears hear..... mind embellish..... eyes invision..... body move.......to.......S o u n d  a rhyme, yo rhythm?, that repetitive beat echoes louder as it repeats
a drum? ...... a drummer ....... drumming.......thump de thump, thump de thump like a heart beat no pitter patter although it palpitates a jazzy be-bop, bip, bass and bounce!
i've gotta hold on to my seat this could make me weak
shh shh whispers resonates the back ground and tranquil quiteness over shadows the fore ground of this ocean
interestingly peculiar.........intrigued allure........satisfaction assured
stirring my drink, i sit back, i relax, i sip, i swallow, i gulp everything....real...is.....pure!

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ginga commented on NIECY'S FLOW

02-28-2010

Niecy, This poem seems to have a syncopated rhythm and a free-spirited and expressive chant of the one and only Niecy! ginga

Ming commented on NIECY'S FLOW

02-06-2010

This flows like HipHopJazz . . Awesome rhythm, flow . . . This should be read out loud and.or set to music . -Ming

Silent1 commented on NIECY'S FLOW

12-08-2009

This poem is amazing. The only thing better than reading it would be hearing it live from the author herself. Well done.

Niecy

12/08/2009

Thank you for stopping by to read, always gotta throw an amusing diversion in there every now & then! Maybe I will voice blog and place on my myspace blog page, I don't think this site is set up for voice blogging yet so you'll have to visit my page & check the voice blog... www.myspace.com/peacfo1 Give a day or so though!

Knwldge commented on NIECY'S FLOW

12-06-2009

Yo Niecy, I'm feeling this one heavy. You got so much flava "satisfaction assured, stirring my drink, i sit back, i relax" yo im wit u

Niecy

12/08/2009

Hey Brotha Knwldge... you stopped by, Thank you for pausing to allow your eyes to take a peak. Hope your mind & senses were inspired in a genuine way! Peace Niecy

VLyric1 commented on NIECY'S FLOW

11-03-2009

Niecy's Flow is profound rhythm caught in your mind while seated at Open Mic night. The ride made me feel as if I was in the raft right along with you. Thanks for the journey. Real is Pure! Hi Friend:)

Niecy

11/04/2009

Hey V, welcome back and I am glad you caught a rift of the ride! That was a fun piece. As always thanks for your comments! Much Luv, much Respect! Holla

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

Niecy’s Poems (11)

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LOVE SEES NO COLOR...... 4
"Ever Since Eve" 14
LOVE TO ME 6
NIECY'S FLOW 7
LOVE KNOWS LUST 6
JUDGEMENT ~ Re entered 3
Food For Thought 8
ACCEPT ME 14
To The Right I Live... 2
MIRRORED REFLECTIONS 5
So Lonely She be 3