Night Dance

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Night Dance

Dance with me under the stars
On sun-warmed walkways
In the cool of night
Cold feet-toe curling ecstasy
   When no one's around

Each--tentative--graceful move
Each gentle grasp of solidity
Followed by wishes on shooting stars
               In our eyes

Pushing, pulling, penetrating
Body, mind, and soul
Like the moon and tide
I follow-yet in my own way
              LEAD

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RandyFrost commented on Night Dance

08-30-2009

i love this poem....its so erotic and to the point...a man that can lead well i guess is every girls dream?

marxred commented on Night Dance

08-27-2009

quite sensuous DQ! touch right down to the toe curling ecstacy! very very nice! dennis

Mangus commented on Night Dance

07-25-2009

the ability to pack a large amount in few words is rare. You have wonderful gift and you use well

Hanna commented on Night Dance

07-03-2009

I think this is more romatic, and passionate yet in an innocent way. It is erotic in the lightest sense of the word/meaning. It also enlightens me on teh esssence of being tru to oneself. I like it

daniel081180 commented on Night Dance

07-01-2009

i have to say what a great read and so much said in so little time. Very great job i will definatly read more great job.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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