Nightmare

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    Nightmare

     

    A best friend once I had

    Yet was long ago

    Transformed into someone

    I no longer know

    A brother once I had

    How well I knew his face

    Seems to me another soul

    Now occupies his space

    A lover once I had

    Twas the center of my life

    His heart he pledged to me

    Chose another for his wife

    A partner once I had

    I trusted with my ware

    Took all of my material wealth

    Then left without a care

    A pure world once I had

    Its beauty to behold

    Now badly scarred and littered

    Its surface bare and cold

    A nightmare once I had

    But with the light of day

    All these things imagined

    Had somehow gone away.

     

     

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    kdarcy commented on Nightmare

    11-13-2010

    I forgot the title when I was reading it, when I was done I went to the top to check the title ... then the tears stopped. Did we both gorget to breathe? Great write k
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    julieannetx

    11/13/2010

    Thanks so much....sometimes things seem so horrible at night and you dream about them...then the next morning it all seems to disappear!

    kdarcy

    11/13/2010

    You got that right, again I say ... be well k

    Magician commented on Nightmare

    10-27-2010

    Talk about emotional writings wow I actuallyt teared up your writing his great will read some more of your work tomorrow thank you for sharing a part of you with all of us
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    julieannetx

    11/01/2010

    Thank you so much.

    bandit1192 commented on Nightmare

    10-18-2010

    Each piece of this poem left me thinking I know that feeling. Been there, done that, and moved on. Liked this very much. TS
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    julieannetx

    10/18/2010

    Thank you!

    NativeAmeriGirl commented on Nightmare

    10-18-2010

    Such profound eloquence and emotions.....an amazing piece indeed.....muchas gracias for allowing me to visit, I'm happy I did....siempre, Native
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    julieannetx

    10/18/2010

    Thank you...I hope you read some of the other poems I posted.

    NativeAmeriGirl

    10/26/2010

    Bueno, I sure have and will continue to do so, smile.....you are very talented.....siempre, Native

    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Nightmare

    10-18-2010

    I love the wording in this piece. The flow of emotion and rhythm is wonderful. The sense of loss at the end is palpable. Great job...........E
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    julieannetx

    10/18/2010

    Thanks so much!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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